For your final blog posts, you will write a persuasive paragraph in a series called "Would You Rather." In each post, I will give you a scenario, and you will have to defend your answer using the following criteria:
- A topic sentence stating your opinion
- At least 3 supporting sentences defending your opinion
- A concluding sentence summarizing your writing
Here is your "Would You Rather" for today:
Would you rather win five million dollars or become a famous superstar?
Please remember to check for mistakes by reading aloud your post to yourself before you publish it. I cannot wait to see what you write!
Your teacher,
Ms. S
31 comments:
Dear Ms. Sikes,
I would rather be a famous super star than have five million dollars. one of the reasons is that you can earn five milion dollars in two years. You would also be famoso(famous for thosewho don`t know Spanish)! I could also do things that I`d like. Basketball, singing, etc.
Dear Ms. Sikes, I would rather become a super star than win 5 million dollars. My first reason is that if you were famous than you could get much more than 5 million dollars, I also would be able to be on tv, and reason is that more people would know who you are. These are my reasons why I'd want to be famous rather than have 5 million dollars.
Dear Ms.Sikes,
I would rather be a superstar than have 5 million dollars, I would rather be a superstar than have 5 million dollars because when you are a superstar you make that once or twice a month so you would get 5 million dollars a month. Also if i was a superstar i would be famous.Also if i was a superstar i would be a basketball star so i could still do what i want and not get stopped every where i go by paparayzi and i would still get paid 5 million dollars every basketball game
Dear Ms. Sikes,
I would rather have $5,000,000 than be a famous superstar. One reason is that if you were a superstar I would want a quite like rather than having people stalk me. One other reason is because I just want $5,000,000 to give to charity because I would just spend it on junk. Also it would mean that you would be on an interview and on TV but you will not be stalked like you would be if you were a superstar. These are the reasons why I would rather have $5,000,000 instead of a superstar
Your Favorite Student,
Will B.
Dear Ms. Sikes,
I would rather be a superstar because if you were a superstar you would still get paid a lot of money. Also, you would be really famous and it would be awesome. If you won 5 million dollars I wouldn't know what to spend it on, but if I made millions being a superstar I would know I was going to get more.
Ms. Sikes,
I would rather be a famous superstar than having 5 million dollars. Having 5 million dollars is fun, but over the course of spending it, I think that I would become more self focused than before. Also, being a superstar is fun and you have fun doing it. I also think that some people like to gamble and they lose all their money on that and it isn't fun using it. I think that being a superstar is more fun than having 5 million dollars.
Dear Ms. Sikes,
If I had the choice to win 5 million- dollars or become a famous superstar, I would choose to become a famous superstar. I would choose that because you would probably get more than 5 million- dollars over the course of time. If I won 5 million- dollars, I would just get it once. Then I would have to use it, and I wouldn't have any of it left. If I was a superstar I would get a lot of money every day\week\month\year. If I had a choice, would want to be a famous superstar.
If I had a choice between being a superstar or winning $5,000,000 I would choose to be a superstar because you could Probably earn more money being a superstar in the first place, also I would probably blow all of my money before I even thought about it. Plus you get to be famous and have fans if you are a superstar. I think being a superstar is better than winning $5,000,000.
If I could either become a famous superstar or win five million dollars I would become a famous superstar. I would rather become a famous superstar because it would be fun to perform in front of a crowd. I would also get to have both lots f money and get to sing in front of a crowd. The last reason is that I love to sing and play guitar and I would rather do that than win a million dollars.
If I had the choice of having five million dollars or a famous superstar, I would choose to have five million dollars. I would choose this instead of a super star because for one, you could do a lot more things. For example, if you were a superstar in football, you could only play football instead of something else. Two, you could have a lot more fun. For example, you could go go-carting everyday for ten years. Of course you could do other things, but you know what I mean. Three, you could go on a shopping spree. I mean, who doesn't like getting new things? I would rather have five million dollars rather than being a superstar.
Dear Ms. Sikes,
I would rather be a superstar. One reason is because if you were a superstar you would probably get five million dollars anyway. It would also be pretty cool to be a superstar. It would certainly be more fun than sitting on the couch buying scratch card praying that you would win. So I would rather be a superstar.
I would rather be a superstar than have 5 million dollars, I would rather be a superstar than have 5 million dollars because when you are a superstar you make that once or twice a month so you would get 5 million dollars a month. Also if i was a superstar i would be famous.Also if i was a superstar i would be a basketball star so i could still do what i want and not get stopped every where i go by paparayzi and i would still get paid 5 million dollars every basketball game. So i would rather be a superstar than get 5 million dollars.
Dear Ms.Sikes,
If I had to choose between getting five million dollars and being a famous superstar, I would choose five million dollars. I would choose five million dollars because I could do something good with it like giving it to charity,paying for school, or buying things for service.It would also be very stressful to be a super star you would have to go to many concerts, you would get stalked, someone might rob you, or if you did something by accident and it looked bad you would see it on every magazine the next morning. The last thing is you could keep it for a "rainy day" in case you fall in debt or you get robbed. A lot of good things come out of five million dollars , and that is why I choose it.
Dear Ms.Sikes,
I would rather be a super star instead of winning 5 million dollars. I would rather be a super star because I would get a lot of money. I would be famous. And I would have a lot of fans. That's why I would be a super star.
Dear Ms.Sikes,
If I had a choice between winning five million dollars or becoming a famous supper star,I would pick become a famous supper star. I have always dreamed of being a supper star since I was five.Also you would make more money because you would earn It by singing or dancing or anything else.One more reason I want to become famous is that I would have fans who would like to lesson to me sing.So that's why I would pick to become famous than win five million dollars.
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Dear Ms. Sikes,
I would rather be a superstar then win five million dollars. I would rather be a superstar because you get lots of money. Also, you would get to be famous, and get to have concerts. I would also like it because it would be fun to perform in front of people. I would rather be a superstar then win five million dollars.
Dear Ms. Sikes,
I would rather be a famous super star! I would be a super star because I could earn more than 5,000,000 bucks. Also I would be in a magazine. Which would be awesome! Lastly, I would rather be a famous super star because I would be famous! Who doesn't want to be famous. I would take any day to be a famous super star than to have 5,000,000 bucks!
Dear Ms.S
I would rather win 5 million dollars for many reasons. I would rather win 5 million dollars because I am stage fright and don't like to perform any music or make movies in front of a ton of people. I'd also like five million dollars because you could be a superstar and not be very rich, but if you won 5 million dollars you could have a bunch of money. I would rather have 5 million dollars because if you were a giant superstar and had like 100 million dollars you would have to go through a lot of trouble finding someone that you can trust to manage your money. Overall I would rather have 5 million dollars for many different reasons and being a superstar isn't in my interest.
I would rather be a super star. I would rather be this because if you are a super star then you would earn more than 5 million dollars. Also you get a lot of attention. Also you get to have a lot of stuff. So would rather be a super star than have 5 million dollars.
I would rather win five-million dollars! I would rather do this because to me being a pop star would be to much for me. I mean you have to make your fans happy, you have to write a ton of songs and you need to at least write one love song, and you have to have concerts and make everyone happy with what you do at the concerts. Well, there would be some good things about being a pop star and some bad things. A bad thing would be if your new you have to make it to "the top of the food chain" to make everyone impressed. A good thing would be you make a lot of money everyday. I would still much rather just get five-million dollars then have all that pressure on me. That's why i would rather want five-million dollars!
Ms. Sikes,
If I had a choice of five million dollars or a carrier as a superstar, I would choose five million dollars. With a carrier as a superstar, who knows if I would become famous, and earn five million dollars? Plus, I don't think the job as a superstar is at all my thing. I would not feel comfortable on a stage and with people, total strangers, knowing my innermost feelings.
Dear Ms. Sikes,
I would rather win 5 million dollars. I would rather have 5 million dollars because I could buy anything I could help people. I could bribe my sister to do anything, too! I would enjoy having 5 million dollars.
I would choose to be a famous superstar, because I already want to be a singer so it would be great anyway. Plus, you would make more than 5 million dollars in a lifetime if you were a famous superstar. You're also gonna spend that 5 million dollars all up at some point, and you couldn't make that much more at one time again.
I would choose 5 million dollar because you could get a lot of stuff. You could become famous if you had 5 million dollars. If you were famous then you would not get as much money. The last reason is if you were famous then who would get anoyed by poparatzzis and weird people.
I would rather be a superstar.
I would be that because that is my dream!
Also because you would probably get 5 million dollars like every week.
Plus you would get to do whatever you wanted for like the rest of your life!
Dear Ms. Sikes,
If I had a choice between to have five million dollars, or to be a superstar. I would choose to be a superstar because you would have five million dollars already. I would like to go on tour and get to perform for people. I would also like to have fans who would care for me. If I had t choose I would choose to be a superstar than to have five million dollars.
I would rather have $5,000,000 because… I would use it to build all my inventions that I want to make. And the huge house I want to build. plus I do not want to be a famous super star because most famous super star are mean and do not care abot others
I would rather become a rock star. I would rather become a rock star because I could keep making more and more money. Another reason is if I won five million dollars it wouldn't last me all my life. My last reason is I would get own tour bus.
I would pick 5 million dollars because if I had 5 million dollars I would become a Superstar. Also, with 5 million dollars I could by 5 million lottery tickets, or I could also buy a yacht and then sell it on ebay for 10 million dollars. I could also buy every NFL Player Jersey, I could also buy a bunch of Taco Bells. I might also buy a bunch of pets, or I could buy Thousands of gallons of Ice Cream. But I would probably give some of it to the homeless. Or I would buy the yacht and sell it for double-price and with the 10 million dollars I would buy the Taco Bells
Ms. Sikes,
I would rather be a superstar because you would probably get five million dollars every week. I have nothing against the idea of having five million dollars but i would also enjoy being a star! The only thing that would hold me back from wanting to be a star is the pressure put onto you and the nerves before going on stage ,and what if someone did not like a song you have that would be embarrassing. But i would still want this more.
I would rather be a famous super star then because I would probably get five thousand dollars a week. If I would get five thousand dollars I would probably spend it. Plus I would be able to be able to double that amount of money in one month.I would have many of fans and people following me. These are some reasons I would rather be a superstar.
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