Read Game 6 poems. Then answer each question. Remember to
explain WHY you chose the winner based on poet's craft (rhyme, line
breaks, punctuation, simile/metaphor, word choice, repetition)and your
personal connection to the meaning.
Your post needs to include the following:
1. What is the meaning of the first poem? (Summarize in one sentence)
2. What is the meaning of the second poem? (Summarize in one sentence)
3. Based on the criteria, which poem did you choose and WHY?
***I still notice some of us need to correctly capitalize the title of the poems. Also, be sure you give a detailed answer in Part 3.
29 comments:
Dear Ms.Sikes,
I think "The Castle in the Fire" is about a kingdom that is in danger by a dragon and the night saves it.
I think "do you carrot all for me?" is about a person that is in love and can't stop thinking about them.
My favorite poem was "The castle in the fire" because it told a better story.
Dear Ms. Sikes,I think "Do You Carrot All For Me" Is about a person who is in love with fruits and veggies.
I think
"The Castle In The Fire" IS telling a story of a brave knight trying to save a lovely lady from a dragon.
My favorite poem was "Do You Care It All For Me" it is my favorite because of its wonderful play on words.
"The Castle in the Fire" is about a dragon garding the castle.
"Do you carrot all for me" is talking about some one that looks like different vegtabals .
I like "The castle in fire" because "Do you carrot for me" does not make a lot on sence to me.
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1. "Do you Carrot all for me" is about vegetables and they are explaining what the other person is to them.
2. "The Castle in the Fire" is about dragons fighting a lady and a knight.
3. I chose "The Castle in the Fire because I liked the rhyming in it. I also liked how it started out and then how it finished, it wrapped up the story
Dear Ms. Sikes,
The first poem is about a castle thats burning down. The second poem is about a person who likes someone but thinks they don't care for him. I chose "Do You Care at All For me" I really like the story and word choice.
1.I think "Do You Carrot all for me?" is about a person who really likes fruit.
2.I think "The Castle of Fire" is about a kinght who has a battle with a dragon to save the girl.
3.I like "The Castle of Fire" because it ryhmes, tells a story and it makes sence.
Dear Ms. Sikes,
1. “Do you carrot all for me?” is all about describing a person with vegetable terms.
2. “The Castle in the Fire” is all about a castle that has very common and weird things.
3. I think “Do you carrot all for me?” because it is better thought out to me and it has more description.
Your Student,
Will Brownie
"Do you carrot all for me?" is about LOVE and a boy\girl is asking someone if they like them.
"The Castle in the Fire" is about a person who is close tho a castle and what they saw happening.
My favorite poem probably is "Do you carrot at all for me?" because i think it's funny, and the word in the poem sound like the words the author is trying to say.
1. "The Castle in the Fire" is about a damsel in distress
and a knight tries to come and save her, but the castle burns down, but they could see through the smoke the damsel and the knight riding off into the distance.
2. "Do you carrot all for me?" is about a person asking someone else f they care for them or not. the funny thing is though, that instead a using regular words, the writer used fruits and vegetables.
3. I chose "Do you carrot all for me?" because of the funny lyrics. For example, "My heart beets for you".
1."Do You Carrot All For Me?" is about a guy who likes somebody and relates it to vegetables.
2."The Castel in the Fire"is about a heroic knight that is really brave and sees a princes and he
Fights a dragon just to save her.
3.I like "The Castel in the Fire" because it is about you should go for what yoiu love even if it is really dangerous.
1."Do You Carrot All For Me" is a funny poem abut love and romance.
2."The Castle in The Fire" I think she is amagining with her fireplace.
3."Do You Carrot All For Me" is my favorite because it uses different subjects about the real thing.
I think that the meaning of"The Castle in the Fire" is that there is a castle and Dragons guard the entrance and inside there is a Lady and a Knight comes in and saves her from the Dragons.
I think that the meaning of"Do you carrot all for me?" is that there is a person that loves her garden and is describing it as if it were a person.
I think that"Do you carrot all for me?" wins because it uses (play on words) and it sounds really cool and"The Castle in the Fire" didn't make much sense to me.
1."Do You Carrot All For Me?" is about a person who tells his feelings with fruit and vegtable words.
2."The Castle in the Fire" is about a knight who fights dragons away from a castle.
3. I chose "The Castle in the Fire" because I like the word choice. It also reminds me of a book I read called "Unicorns of Balinor". They both have fighting and fantasy in them.
Dear Ms. Sikes,
1."Do you carrot all for me?" is about someone who wants to know if someone else likes them because they like that person.
2."The Castle in the Fire" is about someone who is watching a fight to get a princess down from a castle, and the person who is alone fighting, suceeds.
3. I choose "Do you carrot all about me?" because it is funny. I also like it because it rhymes, and I like how it uses fruits and vegetables for the word choice.
1."Do you carrot all for me?" is about the author describing somebody, but their describing with foods.
2."The Castle in the Fire" is about a one day when a dragon went up to this castle, and the dragon just blew fire, and now the castle is on fire. And the guards can't do anything about it because their scared of the ddragon.
3.My favortie is "The Castle in the Fire" because I like how much detail there is in it, and action in it.
“The Castle in the Fire” is about a valiant knight who is faced with the challenge of dragons; yet is able to save the poor maiden stuck in “the old enchanted castle in the fire upon the grate” by the end of the poem.
“Do you carrot all for me?” is a poem that uses vegetables as words, for example, “Do you carrot all for me?” instead of, “Do you care at all for me?”
I liked “Do you carrot all for me” because it struck me as originative for a poem; how often do you see that creative pattern?
"The Castle in the Fire" is about a person watching a fire in a fireplace and imagining a battle between dragons and a knight.
" Do you carrot at all for Me?" is about someone expressing their love for someone else using the names of fruits and vegetables.
My favorite poem is "The Castle in the Fire" because I like the way it describes the person watching a battle between a knight and a dragon that takes place in a fireplace.
"Do you carrot all for me?" is about a person who is asking someone if they love them, using vegetables and fruit.
"The Castle in the Fire" is a fantasy about dragons and knights, "'twas a wonderful fight!" , and in the end, as always, the knight gets the princess.
I like "Do you carrot all for me?" because it is a very creative poem that you have to read out loud to understand. I really do like the way this poem works!
Dear Ms.Sikes,
1. “The Castle in the Fire” is about dragons, a castle that is on fire, and a knight.
2. “Do you Carrot all for me?” is about love.
3. I like “The Castle on fire” because I like nights and dragons + it makes more sins to me
Dear Ms. Sikes,
The first poem, the Castle in the Fire, is about a knight who goes to a castle to help the kidnapped princess. The second poem is a love poem. I like the poem the, The Castle in the Fire, I like it because of the use of words.
1) "Do you carrot all for me" is probably the best poem yet, it makes sense, it`s hilarious and I ca`nt stop reading it over and over again.
2) "The Castle in the Fire" there are a lot of Historical Clues like: `twas, andirons.
3) This poem won by a landslide, and I think you know what it is... the reason i like "Do you carrot all for me?" because it`s my groove. Funny and jokes are my groove. And a lot of that is packed up in that poem, this poem is the best yet.
The poem, "Do You Carrot all for Me" is about, is about maybe a person who loves fruit a lot and thinks he is a good match with fruit (I'm guessing and I'm pretty sure I'm wrong). The poem, "The Castle in Fire" is about, a princess who is guarded by a dragon, and there is a knight who is going to save her. The castle caught on fire and everyone was really worried. Then out came the princess and the knight. If I had to choose between "Do You Carrot all for Me" and "The Castle in Fire" I would choose, "The Castle in Fire". I like it better because it tells more of a story. I really like all the details it gave. I really liked how it was based off of some of the fairytales we read. That was the biggest connection to me.
Dear Ms. Sikes,
1. "Do you carrot all for me?" is about a person who likes someone and is trying to figure out if the person likes him back.
2. " The Castle in the Fire" is about a knight that fought off dragons to rescue the lady held in the castle.
3. I chose "Do You Carrot all for Me?" because it was funny how the writer used fruits and vegetables to tell someone that he likes her.
Dear Ms. Sikes,
1. "The Castle in the Fire" is about a dragon setting fire to the gate, then the knight fought the dragon, and then the lady and knight rode off.
2. "Do You Carrot at All For Me" is about Anonymous describing about someone.
3. I liked "Do You Carrot at All For Me" because I liked how he used the food to "take place" for the real words. There wasn't really any rhyming though, but I thought the food idea was really cool.
"Do you carrot all for me?" Is about wondering if someone cares for you, if someone loves you.
"The Castle in the Fire" is almost like a fairy tale and there's a knight, a dragon and a lady.
I like "Do you carrot all for me?" because I feel like it makes more sense and it means something for many people....because people wonder if some on cares for them...and I like the title!:)
1. "The Castle in the Fire" is about a person looking into the fire and sees a story unfold in the fire.
2. "Do You Carrot All For Me?" isn`t really a story it`s just an author choosing a funny word choice.
3. I like "The Castle in the Fire" because I think it`s cool how instead of being in a real fight, you`re watching it in the fire.
Dear Ms. Sikes,
"The Castle in the Fire" is about a castle that has different thing around it, including fire.
"Do you carrot all for me?" is a person who has a crush on someone.
I like "Do you carrot all for me?" because it replaces some words with plants, and the plants fit the sentence.
"Do you carrot all for me?" is about sombody who likes someone and describes them useing veggies. "The Castle in the Fire" is about a knight who goes and kills the dragons then because of that the lovly lady rode off with him. The winner is "The Castle in the Fire". I just like it because it is about a knight,and I think knight's are cool.
Ms. Sikes,
"Castle on fire" is about someone using thier beautiful imagination. I like the knight fighting the dragon, and ending up with the day. The "do you carrot all for me" is so funny about vegetable references. I like the firt one better.
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