Choose a winner for Game 8 tonight. Refer to the rubric in the previous post to remind yourself of the expectations. Be sure you are writing meaningful reasons for why you choose a poem
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The first poem"How to Eat a Poem" is about what it would be like to eat a poem.
The second poem"The New Suit is about the ups and downs of getting a new suit and what it holds later in life.
I choose"How to Eat a Poem" because I like the word choice and description of the of the poem.
How to Eat a poem is telling you how to eat a poem!
The New Suit is about a man who doesn't want his new suit to get dirty.
I liked How to Eat a poem better because it had a funny way of telling people how to eat a poem and it also had a good way of grabbing the reader's attention.
The first poem I read, How to Eat a Poem, was about how to "eat" a poem in a creative way. The second poem The New Suit is about a man showing of his new suit to other peole and discribing it. I think I will vote for The New Suit because even though both poems were clever and fun, The New Suit was more thought out than How to Eat a Poem.
In the first peom, The New Suit, it is about a man who is not happy about wearing his new suit.
In the second peom, How To Eat A Poem, is about how you should get into reading a poem and not think too much about it.
I like, The New Suit, because I know when I get in my dressy clothes I don't want to get anything on them. I agree with him that I can have more fun wearing jeans!!!
The New Suit was about a person who is at a birthday party and has a new suit and doesn't want to get a stain on it or a mark on it so the next birthday party that person goes to will wear old clothes.
How To A Poem was about someone who was urgent and tempted to eat their food and could not help them selves by just not waiting for everyone one else to take a bite so that person just started to eat.
The one that I liked was How To Eat A Poem because I have connected with that person because I once took a bite out of my food before anyone else did.
How to Eat a Poem is about a poem that you can eat, but this poem is saying how you eat it. The New Suit is about a guy who got a “new suit” and is going to a party so he doesn’t want it to get dirty. I chose The New Suit because rhyme and word. I like how the poet described the suit but incorporated the birthday party and talked about him not trying to get his suit dirty. The word choice is different from other poems like the poet saying dribble and recommendations. The punctuation is also good because a lot of other poems don’t have dashes and a lot of commas.
I thought that the first poem, The New Suit, was describeing the feeling of being in a uncomfotable suit at you birthday party. I thought that the second poem, How To Eat A Poem, was telling you that sometimes you should just dig in. My favorite poem is The New Suit because love the discriptive language in the poem.
The New Suit is about a boy and it is his birthday. He is wearing a new suit and he can't get it dirty so he can't even have fun on his birthday. He says that he will wear some old clothes on his next birthday so he can enjoy all the fun and messy things about a birthday. This poem did not have any rhymes, but it was still pretty good.
How to Eat a Poem is about how to eat a poem. It is telling you not to be polite and just eat the poem. I am not sure if it is supposed to be on a piece of paper or not. The poem tells you that you don't need any eating utensils. This poem was very funny and awesome.
I choose How to Eat a Poem. I choose it because it was funny and it is even funnier to a boy. Both poems didn't rhyme at all. They just told about what was happening in the poem.
First I read How to eat a Poem. Then, The new Suit. How to eat a Poem is about how to eat a poem. The new Suit is about someone who has a new suit and is careful not to get it dirty but the next party they go to, they are going to wear old clothes so they can eat messy food. I liked How to eat a Poem best because it was funny. The only thing bad about it was it did not rhyme as much as I would have liked it to.
The New Suit is about a person getting a new suit. How to eat a poem is about a person telling how to eat a poem. I vote for how to eat a poem because I thought the poem was very entertaining.
The first poem, The New Suit, is about the person describing his suit. The main idea of this poem is the preperations for the party bothering the man.
The second poem, How to Eat a Poem, is about not being polite and taking charge of whatever you are eating. The main idea of this poem is taking charge and you eating all you can.
The first poem The New Suit is about a person who is at a birthday party and has a new suit that is very uncomfortable and next time he is going to wear a more comfortable suit. The second poem How to Eat a poem is about describing a poem in a different way. When you eat a poem you cannot throw anything away and there is always more to read. The poem I liked best was How to Eat a Poem because I liked it because I liked how the poet described a poem in a different view.
The first poem, The New Suit, is about someone who got a new suit and doesn't want to get anything to get on it, and the next year the person is going to wear old clothes.
The second poem, How to Eat a Poem, is about how to eat the poem, and while you're eating don't be polite.
The poem I chose was The New Suit because I liked the punctuation and the line breaks. I liked the punctuation because it made it more like a real moment, and I liked the line breaks because they were different.
I also liked the ability to visualize and I had a personal connection. I liked the ability to visualize because you could visualize it and it was easy, and my personal connection was when my dad goes to meetings for work he tries on some suits. I have a question does that type of poem happen to a lot of men?
How to eat a poem is about you don't have to worry about manners, you don't have to bother to through it away because it is a poem.
The new suit is about how it is someone's b-day and he/she cannot eat ice cream because it might drip, drink juice slowly, no chocolate bombs that might explode, and next year I will wear old clothes so I can eat ice cream and all the other stuff.
I liked the new suit more because it I like some of the discriptive launguge, the line breaks, and like how it told you why he/she cannot eat some foods.
The first poem, How To Eat a Poem, is teaching you “how to eat a poem” and giving you advice how to do it.
The second poem, The New Suit, is about someone trying to keep his or her “new suit” clean.
I didn’t like these two poems that much. They were both a little pointless, but out of them I have to choose “The New Suit” as my favorite. I chose this because I like chocolate and it said chocolate and at least the person is trying not to ruin their new suit, but I wish there were rhyming words.
The reason why I didn’t chose, How To Eat a Poem is because it is a little pointless. I mean when am I going to need to know eat a poem? Also, nothing stood out to me and the only rhyming words were in the end.
How to Eat a Poem is about a person eating and can't use manners. The New Suit is about a guy with a new suit and how he takes care of it. I chose the How to Eat a Poem because I liked the line breaks.
The first poem, The New Suit, is about how you shouldn't spill on a new suit, especially at a party. The second poem, How to Eat a Poem, is about how to eat a poem; you can eat a poem whenever you want, and you eat it with your hands. (This also means "read" a poem.) I chose the poem The New Suit, because it reminds me every time my mom tells me NOT to spill something on my clothes. It also has more poet's craft, which makes it easier to read.
"The New Suit" is about a boy who is uncomfortably dressed in fancy clothes for a birthday party, when he would rather be in play clothes that he doesn't have to worry about messing up.
"How to Eat a Poem" is saying that with poetry you should just dig in and read, but the poet says it as if the words of the poem are food.
I chose to vote for "How to Eat a poem" because I liked how the poet encouraged you to read poetry, but used a funny way to say it.
The two poems How to Eat a Poem and The New Suit, were about how to eat a poem and a new suit, my favorite was How to Eat a Poem, because it stood out to me and it was funny.
The New Suit is about a new brilliant suit on someone’s birthday. They are so excited about wearing it, but they can’t eat ice cream, cake, they can’t drink juice, they can’t have chocolate bombs, so next year he won’t wear any suit at all.
How to Eat a Poem is about how to read a poem! You don’t have to worry about anything, all you do is just enjoy and read.
I choose How to Eat a Poem because I like the meaning. I liked how the line break is too, how after each description it breaks. The reason I don’t really like The New Suit is because it doesn’t really rhyme.
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The first poem"How to Eat a Poem" is about what it would be like to eat a poem.
The second poem"The New Suit is about the ups and downs of getting a new suit and what it holds later in life.
I choose"How to Eat a Poem" because I like the word choice and description of the of the poem.
How to Eat a Poem= How to Eat a Poem tells you just eat the poem!
The New Suit= The New Suit is about a person who doesn't want to get his new suit dirty.
I like How to Eat a Poem because it is interesting and it cathes the reader's attantion.
How to Eat a poem is telling you how to eat a poem!
The New Suit is about a man who doesn't want his new suit to get dirty.
I liked How to Eat a poem better because it had a funny way of telling people how to eat a poem and it also had a good way of grabbing the reader's attention.
The first poem I read, How to Eat a Poem, was about how to "eat" a poem in a creative way. The second poem The New Suit is about a man showing of his new suit to other peole and discribing it. I think I will vote for The New Suit because even though both poems were clever and fun, The New Suit was more thought out than How to Eat a Poem.
In the first peom, The New Suit, it is about a man who is not happy about wearing his new suit.
In the second peom, How To Eat A Poem, is about how you should get into reading a poem and not think too much about it.
I like, The New Suit, because I know when I get in my dressy clothes I don't want to get anything on them. I agree with him that I can have more fun wearing jeans!!!
The New Suit was about a person who is at a birthday party and has a new suit and doesn't want to get a stain on it or a mark on it so the next birthday party that person goes to will wear old clothes.
How To A Poem was about someone who was urgent and tempted to eat their food and could not help them selves by just not waiting for everyone one else to take a bite so that person just started to eat.
The one that I liked was How To Eat A Poem because I have connected with that person because I once took a bite out of my food before anyone else did.
The first I read was New Suit. It is about a person who got a new suit for a party. He likes it but he can't get messy.
When you read a poem you can read it any way you want.
I chose New Suit because I have a connection to it. On holidays I can't get my outfit messy.
How to eat a poem was about how to eat a poem and I thought it was weird because nobody eats poems.
The New Suit was about a guy who got a suit to go to a party and he did not get to eat the cake or ice cream.
I choose The New Suit because it had more description.
How to Eat a Poem is about a poem that you can eat, but this poem is saying how you eat it.
The New Suit is about a guy who got a “new suit” and is going to a party so he doesn’t want it to get dirty.
I chose The New Suit because rhyme and word. I like how the poet described the suit but incorporated the birthday party and talked about him not trying to get his suit dirty. The word choice is different from other poems like the poet saying dribble and recommendations. The punctuation is also good because a lot of other poems don’t have dashes and a lot of commas.
I thought that the first poem, The New Suit, was describeing the feeling of being in a uncomfotable suit at you birthday party.
I thought that the second poem, How To Eat A Poem, was telling you that sometimes you should just dig in.
My favorite poem is The New Suit because love the discriptive language in the poem.
The first poem I read was How to Eat a Poem. It's about that you don't need anything to eat a poem just bite in.
The second poem I read was The New Suite. It's about that you don't get your new clothes dirty but the next year you can.
I choose The New Suite because it is realistic.
The New Suit is about a boy and it is his birthday. He is wearing a new suit and he can't get it dirty so he can't even have fun on his birthday. He says that he will wear some old clothes on his next birthday so he can enjoy all the fun and messy things about a birthday. This poem did not have any rhymes, but it was still pretty good.
How to Eat a Poem is about how to eat a poem. It is telling you not to be polite and just eat the poem. I am not sure if it is supposed to be on a piece of paper or not. The poem tells you that you don't need any eating utensils. This poem was very funny and awesome.
I choose How to Eat a Poem. I choose it because it was funny and it is even funnier to a boy. Both poems didn't rhyme at all. They just told about what was happening in the poem.
First I read How to eat a Poem. Then, The new Suit. How to eat a Poem is about how to eat a poem. The new Suit is about someone who has a new suit and is careful not to get it dirty but the next party they go to, they are going to wear old clothes so they can eat messy food.
I liked How to eat a Poem best because it was funny. The only thing bad about it was it did not rhyme as much as I would have liked it to.
The poem How To Eat A Poem is about being impolite at a table and things like eating it with your fingers.
The poem The New Suit is about someone getting a new suit for his birthday and not trying to get it dirty.
I liked How to Eat A Poem more because I love eating food with my hands with no plate. I liked that poem because I thought it was kind of funny
The New Suit is about a person getting a new suit.
How to eat a poem is about a person telling how to eat a poem.
I vote for how to eat a poem because I thought the poem was very entertaining.
The first poem, The New Suit, is about the person describing his suit. The main idea of this poem is the preperations for the party bothering the man.
The second poem, How to Eat a Poem, is about not being polite and taking charge of whatever you are eating. The main idea of this poem is taking charge and you eating all you can.
I choose How to Eat a Poem to win this round.
The first poem The New Suit is about a person who is at a birthday party and has a new suit that is very uncomfortable and next time he is going to wear a more comfortable suit.
The second poem How to Eat a poem is about describing a poem in a different way. When you eat a poem you cannot throw anything away and there is always more to read.
The poem I liked best was How to Eat a Poem because I liked it because I liked how the poet described a poem in a different view.
The first poem, The New Suit, is about a guy who gets a suit for a party and has the perfect outfit.
The second poem, How to Eat a Poem, is about the steps to eating a poem.
I chose How to Eat a Poem because I thought it was fun to see what the author would tell you about eating a poem. I also really like the line breaks.
The first poem, The New Suit, is about someone who got a new suit and doesn't want to get anything to get on it, and the next year the person is going to wear old clothes.
The second poem, How to Eat a Poem, is about how to eat the poem, and while you're eating don't be polite.
The poem I chose was The New Suit because I liked the punctuation and the line breaks. I liked the punctuation because it made it more like a real moment, and I liked the line breaks because they were different.
I also liked the ability to visualize and I had a personal connection. I liked the ability to visualize because you could visualize it and it was easy, and my personal connection was when my dad goes to meetings for work he tries on some suits.
I have a question does that type of poem happen to a lot of men?
First, I read The New Suit and it was about someone who was at a party and got very dirty.
Then, I read How to Eat a Poem. It was about something telling someone how you can eat a poem and there is nothing to throw away.
I chose How to Eat a Poem, because I thought it was very unusual and I never would have thought of it.
How to eat a poem is about you don't have to worry about manners, you don't have to bother to through it away because it is a poem.
The new suit is about how it is someone's b-day and he/she cannot eat ice cream because it might drip, drink juice slowly, no chocolate bombs that might explode, and next year I will wear old clothes so I can eat ice cream and all the other stuff.
I liked the new suit more because it I like some of the discriptive launguge, the line breaks, and like how it told you why he/she cannot eat some foods.
The first poem, How To Eat a Poem, is teaching you “how to eat a poem” and giving you advice how to do it.
The second poem, The New Suit, is about someone trying to keep his or her “new suit” clean.
I didn’t like these two poems that much. They were both a little pointless, but out of them I have to choose “The New Suit” as my favorite. I chose this because I like chocolate and it said chocolate and at least the person is trying not to ruin their new suit, but I wish there were rhyming words.
The reason why I didn’t chose, How To Eat a Poem is because it is a little pointless. I mean when am I going to need to know eat a poem? Also, nothing stood out to me and the only rhyming words were in the end.
How to Eat a Poem is about a person eating and can't use manners. The New Suit is about a guy with a new suit and how he takes care of it. I chose the How to Eat a Poem because I liked the line breaks.
The first poem, The New Suit, is about how you shouldn't spill on a new suit, especially at a party.
The second poem, How to Eat a Poem, is about how to eat a poem; you can eat a poem whenever you want, and you eat it with your hands. (This also means "read" a poem.)
I chose the poem The New Suit, because it reminds me every time my mom tells me NOT to spill something on my clothes. It also has more poet's craft, which makes it easier to read.
"The New Suit" is about a boy who is uncomfortably dressed in fancy clothes for a birthday party, when he would rather be in play clothes that he doesn't have to worry about messing up.
"How to Eat a Poem" is saying that with poetry you should just dig in and read, but the poet says it as if the words of the poem are food.
I chose to vote for "How to Eat a poem" because I liked how the poet encouraged you to read poetry, but used a funny way to say it.
The two poems How to Eat a Poem and The New Suit, were about how to eat a poem and a new suit, my favorite was How to Eat a Poem, because it stood out to me and it was funny.
The New Suit is about a new brilliant suit on someone’s birthday. They are so excited about wearing it, but they can’t eat ice cream, cake, they can’t drink juice, they can’t have chocolate bombs, so next year he won’t wear any suit at all.
How to Eat a Poem is about how to read a poem! You don’t have to worry about anything, all you do is just enjoy and read.
I choose How to Eat a Poem because I like the meaning. I liked how the line break is too, how after each description it breaks. The reason I don’t really like The New Suit is because it doesn’t really rhyme.
How to eat a poem was saying that to read a poem, to understand it you don't need anything.
The new suit was about how he wasn't prepared for all these things, but next year he will be.
I choose how to eat a poem, because I think that it was more specific, and that it was just better poem
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